Nugatory dream

In love with the song from the author's note.

I am alone in the fire storm.

Created to wander, lost in time…

But time’s an ocean which has no shore

A waltz with many victims, but lacking The Crime…

 

Golden wings has my angel…

Soaring deep, in the sanctuary of my soul

Unbreaking my hope…just touching it gently…

…this monopoly of love…making me whole…

 

Death of the black hole…just birth of a new star

The endless ocean this Nebula can provide…

But still, this ocean cannot keep apart

The spark of two pieces, once they collide.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Luna Zerimar]

I don't know what to say.

Speechless. x

[Ana B.]

:) I hope it's a good speechless

[Jamestown]

Gorgeous piece, I agree the 1st stanza really propelled this poem. I enjoyed reading this
and always get excited to see your work surface, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for always blessing my work with the presence!

[Jamestown]

Of course,

[Confuser]

Ana, the first stanza is brilliantly magical; Soaring deep, in the sanctuary of my soul Unbreaking my hope…just touching it gentle…(gently?)…this monopoly of love…making me whole…: Beautiful! And the ending is so hopeful - that love will survive: But still, this ocean cannot keep apart The spark of two pieces, once they collide. Lovely metaphors for love; uplifting; wonderful writing as always! Thank you. Dale

[Ana B.]

Thank you Dale, you're very sweet :) You give the best reviews!

[Confuser]

I try to tell the truth; there are wonderful writer here, like you. Y/W....Dale

[Ana B.]

It's an honor to be considered amongst them. Enjoy the rest of the Weekend. bye.

[Confuser]

You too sweet girl!! I will try my best. T/Y.....Dale

[ANTO]

I listened to the Beatles - 'Real LOve' while I read this - purely coincidental but perfectly fitting. Your dream could be interpreted thus - Love will conquer all. The imagery is cosmic (sorry ;p )
thank you Ana, for sharing this.

[Ana B.]

Thank you ANTO, for making me smile :)

[ANTO]

Aww - now you're paying it forward - your smile has made me smile - Your very welcome Ana. :))

[Ana B.]

I like Beatles, but i was listening to Chopin's Nocturne while writing this...also fitting :)
thank you for stopping by

[ANTO]

ahh. Claire de lune, now ... . also fitting :))

[Ana B.]

mmm Debussy....one of my faves...

[Deepika]

Awesome lines..Completely logical, but slightly vague at first,
"Created to wander, lost in time…
But time’s an ocean which has no shore
A waltz with many victims, but lacking The Crime…" --Best lines to me!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the review D :)

[Chris]

quite a title...for the thought within the last two lines...

[Ana B.]

life's a contradiction.... a mind is not far behind...