Nugatory dream

In love with the song from the author's note.

I am alone in the fire storm.

Created to wander, lost in time…

But time’s an ocean which has no shore

A waltz with many victims, but lacking The Crime…

 

Golden wings has my angel…

Soaring deep, in the sanctuary of my soul

Unbreaking my hope…just touching it gently…

…this monopoly of love…making me whole…

 

Death of the black hole…just birth of a new star

The endless ocean this Nebula can provide…

But still, this ocean cannot keep apart

The spark of two pieces, once they collide.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Roshan Nair]

Great write Ana! you describe the journeys within the soul so beautifully in your metaphors.. its almost magical...effortless. Good work again :) cheers

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the dreamy review dear :)

[Daisy]

wonderful as always............. I love the way you explain the whole concept in one sentence
Great job

[Ana B.]

Thank you Daisy :)

[MsJewel]

Beautiful poetry Ana. So many wonderful lines...to many to pick my favorite, but what I like most is the softness of your tone which draws me in. Lovely writing my friend.

:) Julie

[Ana B.]

Thank you Julie, you're very sweet :)

[~]

I like how you have brought oneness between sky and earth, through many symbols. I like the flashes of colors through lines too.

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you like it :) Thank you!

[Emily]

'Golden wings has my angel…'
Love this line!
It inspires me!
Keep it up!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily!

[AaronFreitas]

Beautiful work Ana... there was some beautiful descriptions in this poem that made it really enjoyable. Always a pleasure reading what comes from your heart :)

[Ana B.]

Thanks a lot Aaron :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no distance can keep two sparks from igniting in love...

i really like your line about the "waltz with many victims lacking a crime"
wish i had written that one.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Jacob, you are very kind :)

[R Smith]

beautiful poem Ana, 'But time’s an ocean which has no shore' is the line i have to say i wish i had written, truly you have the beauty of your soul in this one, thanks for sharing :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for this Richard :)

[armin]

I liked this one, many lines were just breath taking. Like this one,
Death of the black hole…just birth of a new star
the third line of first stanza was also well
visualised.
Nice write, well done.

Spidey. ...

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the sweet words :)

[Raja Anjana Kothapalli]

Brilliant! I have enjoyed reading it a lot! Thanks for sharing this lovely piece of poetry, Ana B.! ☺

[Ana B.]

Thank you for enjoying Raja :)