Nugatory dream

In love with the song from the author's note.

I am alone in the fire storm.

Created to wander, lost in time…

But time’s an ocean which has no shore

A waltz with many victims, but lacking The Crime…

 

Golden wings has my angel…

Soaring deep, in the sanctuary of my soul

Unbreaking my hope…just touching it gently…

…this monopoly of love…making me whole…

 

Death of the black hole…just birth of a new star

The endless ocean this Nebula can provide…

But still, this ocean cannot keep apart

The spark of two pieces, once they collide.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Falcon1]

speak of a collision course two in love my travel and explosive ending at the ebb and flow Where the heart strings slipped a knot.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by :)

[Ballpark Frank]

Beautifully written. I read it 3 times to really get the flavor. It made me think of my own life and my choices.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Frank :)

[Tony Jordan]

I love how you turned the oft used phrase for insurance companies 'victimless crimes' on it's head here with crimeless victims. Who can be blamed anyway - who is the perpetrator. Are victims born or do they develop?
Thought-stirring piece Ana.

[Ana B.]

hahaha, did not think in that direction at all :D I love that this is what it reminded you of. Thank you for stopping by dear friend :)

[W R Stowe]

To me this describes the fate of two hearts destined to be with each other and for each end,there is a new beginning at least this is what I feel from this write nicely presented

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much.

[W R Stowe]

Your quite welcome

[Wordpress]

There was a raw imagination in this I rarely see in poems Ana, you really created a tapestry of wonder.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for saying so.

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the poem Ana.
"Death of the black hole…just birth of a new star
The endless ocean this Nebula can provide…
But still, this ocean cannot keep apart
The spark of two pieces, once they collide."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. You had me at ocean and the sea.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[Mayank]

I liked the concept and I loved the rhymes, very profound piece.

[Ana B.]

Thank you a lot for the review!

[Saddam]

Gentle piece and a marvelous write dear friend.
Loved it.

[Ana B.]

Thank you sweetie!

[Cool Girl]

Awesome piece!! You're so talented :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much!

[Cool Girl]

You're very welcome :)

[anne]

beautiful dear..like each of yours..loved it..:))

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the sweet words dear :)