The Secret

He holds the secret of the world

This greatest sorcerer

So what if that world’s no bigger than a pearl?

And he’s just a spell deliverer…

 

She holds the world in a shell

So that no one could find it

He’ll fight Heaven and Hell

To keep this precious gift.

 

In snow, in rain, in the wind

He’ll fight for her…

Emotions precise and distinct

But are they  for the pearl or the shell?

 

 

 

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Short poem but not short on emotion. how ever in the second line of the first stanza I feel that it should have been some thing like this
"Thus he became the greatest sorcerer"

[Ana B.]

thanks for the suggestion

[Terrence Chang]

your welcome

[Saddam]

Emotions precise and distinct
But is it for the pearl or the shell?

I think for both. Because pearl is nothing without shell and only shell is worse without pearl.
beautiful write dear as always.

[Ana B.]

hmmm.....interesting thought :) thank you for the sweet words S :)

[Saddam]

Your are fabulous dear.
Most welcome