The Secret

He holds the secret of the world

This greatest sorcerer

So what if that world’s no bigger than a pearl?

And he’s just a spell deliverer…

 

She holds the world in a shell

So that no one could find it

He’ll fight Heaven and Hell

To keep this precious gift.

 

In snow, in rain, in the wind

He’ll fight for her…

Emotions precise and distinct

But are they  for the pearl or the shell?

 

 

 

Reviews

[Wordpress]

I admire the magic and intrigue you captured in this poem.

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[Lyndy]

Nice poem, this is really a beautiful piece of writing! :D

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the sweet review!

[Cool Girl]

The metaphors made the piece have a nice flow and tone :)

[Ana B.]

Thanks for enjoying this CG :)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!! :)

[Mayank]

The metaphors here made poem very beautiful, a fight for love.

[Ana B.]

thank you Mayank :)

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethi..]

I'm not sure about whether they were there for the pearl or the shell... But, I sure am here for your poetry Ana:)

[Ana B.]

:) thank you JIJ, you're very sweet.

[Chris]

Ah... but his pearl is within her shell and hence hers as well...

[Ana B.]

hmm, i hope they both know this :)

[Abilash Uttama]

love,passion portrayed through metaphors, a great piece indeed..!

[Ana B.]

Thank you!

[Jamestown]

Crazy good metaphor use and free flowing, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much James!

[Luna Zerimar]

Love! Great job!

He should fight for the pearl of course.

[Ana B.]

Yes we should. All of us. Thank you Jessica :)

[Emily]

Love the first line!
Keep it up!!

[Ana B.]

Thanks Emily