Sins

ruffling through my old pages lately....

If darkness had a name

What would you call it?

Someone who could take the blame

that is yours…but you’re afraid to admit

 

Wicked lilies at your door

Daring you to pick them up

Tsk,tsk…this darkness…easy to adore

Drinking your tears from morality’s cup…

 

Ascending…descending from this debasement

Because our obstinance is leading all the time

So who gets to decide the final assessment?

And who gets to write the infinite rhyme?

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[ROXANE DORSEY]

Very lovely to adore. thanks for sharing this wonderful talent.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Roxane :)

[rowan.taylorrr]

i love this piece, it honestly brought me into it the way that it was written. you provided a lot of imagery and i love it so much

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Britt :)

[Darling]

I enjoyed this piece very much and " Someone who could take the blame that is yours…but you’re afraid to admit" is a valuable lesson in life. Nice work.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by, Darling :)

[Darling]

You most welcome.

[R J Askew]

Ach, what is this I find before me? A lily? Now who would leave such a thing. I shall place it in water and study it closely for clues.

[Ana B.]

haha, well everything has at least two sides to it...

[R J Askew]

I swear said lily has shifted in its vase overnight.

[LapseOfMind]

Very nicely done, I truly enjoyed this! Keep up the great writing

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[aLittlePain]

You season the darkness with elegance and allure. She would be my lover I am certain of it! You've penned some killer lines, nuggets of truth... as always I'm rather taken with your words. R xo

[Ana B.]

haha, thank you for the praise Ray :)

[aLittlePain]

You're welcome

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

If darkness had a name, I would call her, convenience, used at my need, invited at my time, and hid under when blameless. Yes, she is beautiful, I might just marry her some time

[Ana B.]

lol, clever :)

[Adam Adams]

Very clever. You speak enough off of your words... with cunning-ness. There's a depth of something dark in your words though a light of shine as well which makes this write interesting reading. Wonderful poetry. Your rhythmic pattern that you always follow, sorry to say but it, is very gorgeous, of course, not more than you, Ana. Enjoyed reading it!

[Ana B.]

Ah, you're too kind my dear. Thank you very much!

[Adam Adams]

The glimpse of someone's heart is always reflected through what he writes of and how he may understand the worth of someone's characteristics. Your words speak of 'everything' very well even if they're full of visions or realism of real nice moments. Always good to study you, whole.

[Ana B.]

Thank you again :) I'm glad you decided to post more poems after all :) Always a pleasure.

[Adam Adams]

Sometimes, it's good to forgive people but not to forget what they always do.. did and done. I'm feeling quite good either to come back, of course, at your heart as well. (smile)

[Ana B.]

I know what you mean...with time i became not so forgiving....and it's good that you did....no matter the deeds, they should not stay with us. Welcome back then!

[Adam Adams]

Though, it still hurts when I find 'em on here...
... but yeah, you're right, "they shouldn't stay with us", cause, I guess, they never stay with us for long. It's only a figment of time that brings 'em to our lives in some phases and we must learn to forget 'em and start walking with trends. Thanks for the words & welcoming me back! ;)

[Ana B.]

Anytime, have a smashing day :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

10 out of 10 in all sort.....And who gets to write the infinite rhyme?

[Ana B.]

thank you very much :)

[W R Stowe]

And the answer is GOD He will have the final say upon our eternity and where we will spend it we need get right or left you have very good rhythm and flow with this write well done

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for saying so

[W R Stowe]

you're quite welcome