Fascination

Soul’s a fire. Gorgeous blue flame…

And all of it burns only around one name.

Restless in its glory…lovely in its spelling

Cause its existence is nothing if not prevailing…

 

 Looking out for this enticing caress

To know we’re not alone in loneliness

Not fully in love, but still

All the ingredients starting to whirl…

 

 

All these layers, fighting to be controlled

Never been bought, but I’m already sold.

Dancing all around for this allure

Surrounded in sludge, but feeling so pure.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful movement of words and thoughts.
"All these layers, fighting to be controlled
Never been bought, but I’m already sold.
Dancing all around for this allure
Surrounded in sludge, but feeling so pure."
The above lines are perfect. Feeling pure and content. A good place to be. Thank you dear Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear John for always finding the right words :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Chris]

THIS was a "smile" in word form...

[Ana B.]

Is it? I'm glad it is, if it is :D

[hardeep sabharwal]

very beautifully expressed the feelings here, I enjoyed reading this

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[R Smith]

that is an excellent poem Ana, i believe one of your best yet, the opening stanza is amazing the whole beyond compare, thank you for sharing :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you so very much Richard, i'm glad this experiment turned out nice :)

[armin]

I really enjoyed this one came out from your talented pen. And look at the stanza, beautiful creation,

To know we’re not alone in lonelinessNot fully in love, but still
All the ingredients starting to whirl…
All these layers, fighting to be controlled
Never been bought, but I’m already sold.

Keep up the good work. Well done.

Spidey. ...

[Ana B.]

Thank you again, for the lovely words Spidey :)