Fascination

Soul’s a fire. Gorgeous blue flame…

And all of it burns only around one name.

Restless in its glory…lovely in its spelling

Cause its existence is nothing if not prevailing…

 

 Looking out for this enticing caress

To know we’re not alone in loneliness

Not fully in love, but still

All the ingredients starting to whirl…

 

 

All these layers, fighting to be controlled

Never been bought, but I’m already sold.

Dancing all around for this allure

Surrounded in sludge, but feeling so pure.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful movement of words and thoughts.
"All these layers, fighting to be controlled
Never been bought, but I’m already sold.
Dancing all around for this allure
Surrounded in sludge, but feeling so pure."
The above lines are perfect. Feeling pure and content. A good place to be. Thank you dear Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear John for always finding the right words :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Saddam]

Fascinate write here as always............

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear :)

[Saddam]

You are most welcome dear friend....

[AaronFreitas]

Awesome work Ana! I really enjoyed the lines "Looking out for this enticing caress, To know we’re not alone in loneliness" Very enjoyable read :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Aaron :) i'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

[Emily]

'Not fully in love, but still'
Line this line!
Keep it up!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily :)

[Daisy]

[Ana B.]

How did you do that? usually appear the words: you must insert at least 25 charachters.... do tell :)

[Daisy]

i don't know either............. i have wrote two sentences but they came like this both times... :) its just random i think

[NoelHC]

"Not fully in love, but still
All the ingredients starting to whirl…"

I can relate to that condition, that euphoric feeling of starting to fall in love, a little unsure about our own feelings, about the feelings of the other, but you can sense there is a change coming.

Well written Ana.

[Ana B.]

:) that's among the best feelings.....thank you for the lovely review Noel :)

[~]

Ana B. This poem made me happy for you. To be able to write these verses it means that your inside is glowing. Beautiful sentiment :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the sweet words :) I certainly hope so...

[Jamestown]

This is terrific, beautiful flowing, calming messages, thanks for sharing, PTL

[Ana B.]

Thank you James, for always being sweet :)

[Prashant Rajput]

awesome work my friend...fantastic rhyming sequence.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Roshan Nair]

I think this piece is extremely positive and spells hope for love ..the certainty of it finding you, keeping that belief. Remarkable sentiment!
Great work! thanks for sharing it!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the lovely review :)