Self destructive

When you’re knocking on a door

Whom do you expect on the other side?

A person whom you thought you can ignore…

Or the one who cracked your heart so  wide…

 

Turn back to the beginning

And get lost in the crowd

So you could relieve this confusing feeling

And your lil heart is beating sooo loud…

 

Why won’t I ever learn

To know better….

That there is no return

Once a heart takes a header

 

Reviews

[anonymous]

Beautiful! That was very deep. I hope to be able to write like that some day. "Turn back to the beginning and get lost in the crowd so you could relieve this confusing feeling and your lil heart is beating sooo loud" was my favorite part. Most people can relate to that feeling. I love the way you put it into words so perfectly.

[Ana B.]

Thank you A, i'm more than sure you'll succeed....just go along with your feelings, that is the greatest muse, that and music :)

[armin]

Touching piece of poetry, I liked it from the beginning,
When you’re knocking on a doorWhom do you expect on the other side?

The end maybe hopeless but it fits well according to the theme and emotions ,indeed the poetry was sad.
Great work, I enjoyed the read.

Spidey. ...

[Ana B.]

Thank you S.....sad poems are kind of my thing....the other ones.....i don't like hoe they turn out :)

[armin]

hmmm... :).

[Emily]

'Whom do you expect on the other side?'
I love this line, it's like it's got a deeper mean. Like who you want to be on the other side.
Keep it up!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily :)

[Lizardo]

Wow, this is raelly good!
Great piece of poetry!

[Ana B.]

Thank you so much :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

I can relate to self destructive behavior. It started with a death wish in my youth. Unloved and lacking any self esteem, Vietnam caused more damage, I drank heavily, my father caused more damage, more drinking.

Then nursing...........we won't go into that.

Your words Ana B. Carry the sincerity of daylight.

Regards,

Al

[Ana B.]

seems you had a long road and still you're not afraid to look at the light. That is rare.
Thank you for stopping by Al.

[Daisy]

awesome.... wonderful writing.... good job

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Daisy :)

[Daisy]

you are welcome :)

[AaronFreitas]

Great poem! I really enjoyed reading your thoughts... keep up the good work :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Aaron :)

[AaronFreitas]

You are very welcome cutie :)

[Deepika]

We tend to have a soft spot for someone that hurt us, and in turn hurt the once that genuinely care for us. First stanza gave me goosebumps. wonderful write! :)

[Ana B.]

Well, the important thing is to put up with it.....thank you for stopping by D :)

[R Smith]

tell me about it, i've a passion for taking a header, can't help myself lol, a lovely poem Ana, one of your most beautiful :)

[Ana B.]

really? oh Richard, you're a sweetie :) thank you for the loveliest review

[R Smith]

you'll always be welcome for me Ana, i love your writing :)

[Ana B.]

:) and I am a fan of yours

[Saddam]

Why won’t I ever learn
To know better….
That there is no return.

WHY WON'T I EVER LEARN TO KNOW BETTER!!!!!!
Very nice dear, Love it.

[Ana B.]

thank you for the sweet review dear :)

[Saddam]

You are most welcome dear.......

[Prashant Rajput]

amazing poetry...the lines are very interesting.I enjoyed it reading.

[Ana B.]

:) thank you very much

[Prashant Rajput]

you are welcome.