Smoke and Mirrors

Rest your head on this cloud

Full of promises and hope

Savor the life while its around

No big plans to make or ''elope''…

 

Wishing is our greatest magic

But so as our greatest enemy

Sleeplessly embracing logic

And the big stops of our destiny…

 

No heavy words can bring down

A solid faith - adorning crown

No sweet lies can make justice

For speaking the truth…so out of practice

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lizardo]

''Wishing is our greatest magic
But so as our greatest enemy''
This poem is one of the best I've read in a while here, words of wisdom
The last stanza is really good, everything about the poem is good.
Wishing is our magic but our greates enemy? it's true, it can lead you to bad things too.
Great poem!

[Ana B.]

Thank you so much Lizardo :) I'm very glad you liked it

[Lizardo]

You're welcome! This reminded me of Imagine Dragon's (I don't know if you ever heard about them)
read moreYou're welcome! This reminded me of Imagine Dragon's (I don't know if you ever heard about them)
New coming album, "Smoke and Mirrors"

[Ana B.]

Yes I did heard about them. Love the band. Especially the song ''Amsterdam'' :)

[Lizardo]

Mine is On top of the world :)

[Ana B.]

nice :) also looove the band: White Rabbits....

[Lizardo]

I will hear that band, it is new to me

[R Smith]

we make our plans and schemes to no avail, our wishes lose to logic and fate, faith will take us home through understanding and truth, all beautiful thoughts Ana just take the true way and be free :)

[Ana B.]

:) thank you Richard for being your sweet self :)

[R Smith]

as are you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet.
"No heavy words can bring down
A solid faith - adorning crown
No sweet lies can make justice
For speaking the truth…so out of practice"
New world. We must dig for the truth. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

We do have to. Thank you for the sweet words my dear friend :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[willweb]

"Rest you head on this cloud" I really liked that line, it was a great opening to a wonderful poem. Very nicely penned Ana B.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Will, you're always very kind :)
Did I mention that i'm a fan of your work? i really am.