Smoke and Mirrors

Rest your head on this cloud

Full of promises and hope

Savor the life while its around

No big plans to make or ''elope''…

 

Wishing is our greatest magic

But so as our greatest enemy

Sleeplessly embracing logic

And the big stops of our destiny…

 

No heavy words can bring down

A solid faith - adorning crown

No sweet lies can make justice

For speaking the truth…so out of practice

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[anonymous]

I loved this poem! It was very deep and heartfelt. My favorite line was, "wishing is our greatest magic, but also our greatest enemy." So much could be taken out of this one line. You have a wonderful way with words and I hope to read more. Please continue to write and thank you for sharing with us. :)

[Ana B.]

Your words are very inspiring. Thank you so much for saying them :)

[Roshan Nair]

Lovely piece.. its something that tells me that you are extremely strong inside but you'll not flaunt it to the rest of the world just for the sake of it, although if it does try to test you it will find out.
Great work Ana :)
I really admire the way this is written

[Ana B.]

Sometimes i think i'm not strong enough, but your words are very encouraging :) Thank you for them Roshan :)

[Mayank]

your words are blended so well here, like fine glass of whiskey!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much!

[MsJewel]

Wise words shared in this well written little gem!

:) Julie

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the sweet words Julie :)

[~]

True verses. Hanging on to the things you know and love.

[Ana B.]

Indeed. Thank you :)

[~]

welcome :)

[Morissa Schwartz]

I like the lines and how each serves a distinct purpose. Very well written.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Morissa.

[H.D. Murphy]

Loved it! Beautiful! You have a great way with words - thank you for sharing!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for reading :)

[Tate Morgan]

inspite of what others might say
and despite the follys of youth
there's nothing more kingly than kindness
and nothing more noble than truth

[Ana B.]

Beautiful and truest words :)

[ANTO]

The use of 'elope' here is masterful rhyming Ana B. I love that

"A solid faith - adorning crown" - wow

No smoke and mirrors here - just straight shooting from the hip.
Class Ana B.

[Ana B.]

:) Thank you my dear, for the lovely review :)

[Tomorrowneverknows]

Your poetry is really beautiful. You have a thorough knowledge of human being . I do like each line and like you, I do believe in destiny . The great lines of our lives are written with iron and fire and nothing and no one can change them.

- Jesus

[Ana B.]

thank you for stoppping by, and for the sweet words :) I do believe in destiny.....its of our own making but its also unavoidable....

[Tomorrowneverknows]

You're very welcome . I am fully agree from own experience. I have been thinking so much about it. Your poems are a reflection of a very sensitive and refined person. I perceive it very clearly. It's not frequent at all in these times so complex. I wish you all the best. Take care.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :) Take care as well