Sad world

Tears are often fables

Spoken by a woman

In the world where angels

Are nothing but a rumor

 

Between the world of obscurity

And that of the light

The edge lost its purity

And the shadows will glide

 

Eyes don’t see the harmony

Hands can’t touch enough

Ears don’t hear the symphony

Hearts don’t feel the love…

Author's Note

Reviews

[Saddam]

It is very nicely and accurately done dear.
Love it.

[Ana B.]

Thank you so much S :)

[NoelHC]

Very well stated, and well written. I enjoyed this one Ana.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by Noel :) I'm thrilled you enjoyed it.

[ANTO]

This melted in my mouth as I read it out to myself - much like those expensive but 'over-all-too-soon' luxury chocolates one gets in the choclatiers.
I could have devoured a lot more ...
thanks Ana

[Ana B.]

Ha ha, its a pleasure my work is being compared to expensive chocolates, i'm a fan on those myself :D thank you for the sweet review :)

[Confuser]

Wow, just wrote something, gone? Huumm, Beautiful as always; loved it from the beginning to end. Your poetry ROCKS, like you know who, with the tattoes....I see the line angels are rumors (sad and wrong- to me); the beginning where is write tears are often fables spoken by women...you're just a wonderful writer. I know when I come here something insightful and beautiful awaits me. Thank you. Dale

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the beautiful words Dale. Truth speaking, i always believed in angels to watch over us, because otherwise we'd be completely lost. But, a poem is a poem....a small desperate part of me.I'm thrilled you liked it!

[Confuser]

Angels do; I don't have to understand why. I have four beautiful angels in a curio cabinet; just in case they see; hehehe. It is always hard at Christmas for me to put one up my mother gave me. I'm sorry there are two reviews with a joke. But your poems, the small part of you, brings happiness to others, like me and I am thanksful. Dale

[Ana B.]

Agh, your reviews are always so sweet and genuine, its no problem, because it might've happened to me as well once or twice.....must be some server problems...
I'm very glad its happiness i bring in people, not sadness. :)

[Confuser]

You got that right! Always be kind and you are. Dale

[Confuser]

Beautiful writing! Loved it from the beginning with Tears are often fables spoken by women: Wow! Great writing once again. Thank you so much. Your poems ROCK!! like you know who....with the tattoes..Dale

[Jamestown]

Sad but true, I think that is so sad, thanks for sharing.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for reading it!

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethi..]

First up.... I hope you are alright:) Because I can feel that you write from the deep chambers hidden in your soft heart:) Hopefully this is a way of showing your strength against all the odds you are facing....
If I'm wrong on my judgement... Then, you have a wonderful talent of bringing the heart of a wounded person to life through your writing, I must say.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for your concern Jerarld, and yes, I'm alright, wonderful in fact :) My work reflects only a small piece of me....because I'm not very good at writing the jolly stuff.....the sad poems its more of my style, but I promise I'm very cheerful and optimistic person :D

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

great to know.... Love your style anyways:)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Jerald, never expected anyone to actually read my work....

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Always expect big Ana:)
The least we can get is a broken heart:)
Which will become the fuel to crave our art:)

[Ana B.]

True words my friend :) Thanks for the support

[Jerald Infant Jeyarethinam]

Anytime!!!

[Lizardo]

The name goes according to the poem, a very sad world...
I love this poem! You did a great job on this one :)

[Ana B.]

thank you very much for stopping by :)

[Lizardo]

you are welcome!

[Alfred Kukitz]

It's a sad world Ana B. But we always have you for beauty and comfort. Thank You!

Regards,

Al

[Ana B.]

awww, such sweet words......thank you Al

[Luna Zerimar]

Your words are gorgeous.

I cannot express...well, tell....you how much this peice brought life to my mind.

The images you have put up are beautiful, almost like dreams casted through clear crystals.

The last stanza is what I really liked. You have that right.

Our world just....it doesn't...we don't know what it truly holds.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the beautiful words. I really hope this world exists only in our mind.....after all, there is a lot of beauty, sometimes hard to see, but nestled right beside the darkness.....