Sad world

Tears are often fables

Spoken by a woman

In the world where angels

Are nothing but a rumor

 

Between the world of obscurity

And that of the light

The edge lost its purity

And the shadows will glide

 

Eyes don’t see the harmony

Hands can’t touch enough

Ears don’t hear the symphony

Hearts don’t feel the love…

Author's Note

Reviews

[Adriancito Lupus Centen..]

Pretty cute, darkness is dancing with light like a shade.
I can feel a nice heat reading your poem.

Well done¡

[Ana B.]

Thanks, ALC :)

[Anjan]

Amazing.i read ur works manytimes.I am amazd every single time.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Anjan :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW AwesOme ... Your words are so intense and beautiful. I truly enjoyed reading it. And the words spoken in this Poem are very HONEST!
"Eyes don’t see the harmony
Hands can’t touch enough
Ears don’t hear the symphony
Hearts don’t feel the love…"
OMG! I love it ^_^
Thanks for sharing such an amazing work!

[Ana B.]

Thank you sweet girl ;)

[bluessadmood]

and even more..lots more..so sad

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by...

[bluessadmood]

you are welcome.

[Adam Adams]

One of my fav. writes!

"Ears don’t hear the symphony
Hearts don’t feel the love…"

How true. Yes, the heart's such a thing that ain't seem to feel love but only the deception of mind that enters its flesh with empathy. What a beautiful stortyarcs you've come up with!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Adams, you're very kind :)

[A. Amos]

wonderful, deep and honest portrait of the world these days!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by dear A :) its been a good while. Hope all is well

[A. Amos]

All is great just madly busy in finishing my books:) you're most welcome

[Mayank]

I think it's really beautiful poetry with the clear cut message, it touches reader's heart.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the lovely words M :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your writing is so deep, and so meaningful.
I love how you rhyme big words, I need to do that more in my poems.
I loved this one to :)
Keep writing :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for the lovely words :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome :)

[willweb]

Such a sad but resonating piece Ana. I really enjoyed this look into the heart of one who seem to feel it is empty.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Will, you're always too good to me :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You said a lot in the poetry.
"Tears are often fables
Spoken by a woman
In the world where angels
Are nothing but a rumor"
Hard to see good. But we must try. Maybe the the beginning of kindness, concern and positive word. A powerful poem dear Ana. Made me think tonight. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you for your thoughts John. They are always inspiring. And you're right....it's hard to see good....and you can't fault anyone for trying....

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right and you are welcome.