No Hint

If I don’t watch out ,you are going to be

The missing pearl of this precious string

But I can’t make you see what I see

When sometimes I really don’t see a thing…

 

These conglomerate storms are too much

Yet the sunlight makes it hard to see clear

Squirming my eyes, I’m too fragile for a touch

Do I want you just because you’re near?

 

Oh another love, another set of arms…

Roaming the alleys of this corrupted mind

What’s the real reflection behind these multiple charms

That will be enough to leave my reluctance behind?

 

I can stand so many things…especially the pain…

Will I stand another round though?

All that is said and done will always remain…

An echo in my heart , silenced a long time ago.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[willweb]

It is sad when those echoes are finally silenced. This was very deep and sad Ana.

[Ana B.]

It is sad........but maybe, someday....
thank you for stopping by Will

[willweb]

That is the good thing about todays Ana, there is always a tomorrow.

[Ana B.]

truest words.

[Saddam]

All that is said and done will always remain…
An echo in my heart , silenced a long time ago.

This is very difficult but a beautiful piece dear. Thanks for sharing it.

[Ana B.]

thank you for the opinion dear :D i'm glad you stopped by

[Saddam]

You are welcome dear.

[Coyote Poetry]

The older I get. Love become different. Now my children hold my love and concern. Young love is the best love. I told people. With children. Love must be divided.
"Oh another love, another set of arms…
Roaming the alleys of this corrupted mind
What’s the real reflection behind these multiple charms
That will be enough to leave my reluctance behind? "
Good to be young and able to forget. Love is tested and few people can walk alone. I enjoyed the poem. Open the door to thoughts and memories. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Children open the heart to a love that is pure and unaltering.....they change our life and bring a purpose. I hope that when i'll have them, they will do that for me. But you are right - love changes its meaning with time. Thank you for stopping by John.

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is learning. If we are lucky. We land in a good place.

[anne]

If I don’t watch out ,you are going to be
The missing pearl of this precious string...

I can stand so many things…especially the pain…
Will I stand another round though?
All that is said and done will always remain…
An echo in my heart , silenced a long time ago.
..beautiful flow of emotions and feeling....:))

[Ana B.]

Thank you Anne for liking my work :D

[Matching Socks]

Beautifully penned.
Regret, longing, uncertainty. It all echoes in your poem.
You've captured these feelings well.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for stopping by Ana :) Happy new Year btw (a little late but i bet nobody has said it today :D )

[Matching Socks]

:) happy new year.

[R Smith]

If I don’t watch out ,you are going to be
The missing pearl of this precious string
But I can’t make you see what I see
When sometimes I really don’t see a thing…

I don't often quote from work in reviews but this stanza is beautifully outstanding, i love your apparent indecision in this poem of love and regret, your writing always amazes me, thank you for this :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Richard, very much, for reading and liking it :)