No Hint

If I don’t watch out ,you are going to be

The missing pearl of this precious string

But I can’t make you see what I see

When sometimes I really don’t see a thing…

 

These conglomerate storms are too much

Yet the sunlight makes it hard to see clear

Squirming my eyes, I’m too fragile for a touch

Do I want you just because you’re near?

 

Oh another love, another set of arms…

Roaming the alleys of this corrupted mind

What’s the real reflection behind these multiple charms

That will be enough to leave my reluctance behind?

 

I can stand so many things…especially the pain…

Will I stand another round though?

All that is said and done will always remain…

An echo in my heart , silenced a long time ago.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Abilash Uttama]

Nice poem, enjoyed reading it.

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[MoriartyMesa]

This might be a bit before your time, but the song matches the words.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z5OHZRghtco

[Ana B.]

:) indeed. Thank you!

[Emily]

Nice wording!
Well done!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily!

[Chris]

I've sat and thought with this one... opening my mind's eyes - listening to my own breath. Immortality has a cost ...being remembered.

[Ana B.]

is it too high?

[AaronFreitas]

Very good poem I really enjoyed it :)

[Ana B.]

Thanks a lot !

[Daisy]

well written.... great job

[Ana B.]

thank you Daisy!

[Lyndy]

I like this poem, it's very well written! :D

[Ana B.]

Thank you Lyndy!

[Jamestown]

No doubt feel the sadness in this piece, so well written and
your work always is. I can relate, but I always have faith that
my angel is just around the corner and you should too!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

I do have hope and faith, always will.
Thank you James.

[ANTO]

The first stanza is so enigmatic - the speaker is unable or unwilling to voice their concerns in a coherent fashion - overwhelmed perhaps by events and emotions
If only a truer love would ride in from the horizon - one that the speaker can be 100% sure of - a cast-iron guarantee of happiness forever is sought but the attachment to a love that may be toxic is also very strong. Where is Prince Charming - will he appear and if so will it be in time or will the writer expire under the pressure of 'settling' for second best rather than nothing.
A sad write - no sweet in this at all. Nor bitterness either though, just a feeling of hopelessness.
Well done Ana , this moved me greatly .
Thanks for the RR

[Ana B.]

I'm deeply touched you liked it ANTO...although it's super sad, it's inspired by a song......there's still hope for the writer :) Thanks for the review