Words are no bricks...

I’m in the Garden

Watching the tree…

You’re not forgotten.

Some things are not meant to be

                                                        Love, hold on to me.

                                                        Home, don’t close the door.

                                                        Youth, don’t wait for this plea.

                                                        Sun, please shine on as before.

Come on, heart, sing loud

Or cry, whatever suits you…

My mind must be proud

That you couldn’t go through…

                                                          Couldn’t build a castle…

                                                          Not from the ruins.

                                                         So  tired of this hustle…

                                                        And these senseless  doings.

 

 

 

 

 

 

               

 

 

Reviews

[Confuser]

What a lovely heartfelt poem. Oh, I enjoyed it very much. You are a creative and very clever writer. Beautiful. Your pleas are delightful, the metaphors devine. Love hold onto me, Home don't close the door, Youth don't wait for me, Sun shine on as before....the pitfalls of love...And these senseless doings. Great ending. You really are so very talented. Thank you

[Ana B.]

oh Dale , thank you very much for liking my work!
thank you

[Confuser]

What's not to love. Beautiful words Ana B. Thank you.

[willweb]

This one reaches out and touches the reader on their heart. Beautiful Ana B.

[Ana B.]

Thank you Will :)

[R Smith]

love the style and beauty of this, Ana you have a really poetic heart :)

[Ana B.]

thank you very much Richard :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

almost feels like the speaker has not been so tainted by life that she has built walls around her...she still wants to hear the singing, be part of it...keep hold of the love in her heart.

[Ana B.]

insightful. Thank you for the review :)

[anne]

Love, hold on to me.
Home, don’t close the door
Youth, don’t wait for this plea.
Sun, please shine on as before..........
such a beautiful poetry....great motivational work...:))

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much A :)

[Saddam]

A brilliant poetry.... That is suit my thought and the environment.

Come on, heart, sing loud
Or cry, whatever suits you…
My mind must be proud
That you couldn’t go through…

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my work S :D

[Saddam]

You are most welcome dear.

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of thoughts and reflection in the poem. Life teaches us to understand. Life can be sweet and hard sometimes. I like the honesty and the tone in the statements. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ana B.]

Thank you John, for always being kind and honest :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Ana.

[NoelHC]

Lovely words and a very interesting structure to this poem. Well done Ana.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the review Noel :)

[Matching Socks]

Love the structure of the poem, and it's such a great motivational poem for the heart.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for reading Ana :) you are always very kind.