Mask

Mask

A Poem by Moalix
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The difference from the inside to the outside

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Beautify the outside

Jagged on the inside

Smiles drip sincerity

Hiding pain you'll never see

For every laugh

and all the glee

A shattered heart

is really me

For all my tears and hurt

I hid away

In hope that I'll be whole again

another day

© 2009 Moalix


Author's Note

Moalix
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We all need to face those trials But it is never easy and no one can say they know what each of us goes through in the recesses of our minds as each of us tend to judge ourselves much harsher than any other .Your greatest asset is your ability to make another feel by putting in writing your true feelings and the short stanzas are an asset you can say more in a few words than many in a few paragraphs


Posted 15 Years Ago


Great description of how our inner world differs from our outer world at times and how we all wear masks from time to time. This is not a very long poem, but it is easily read and easily understood, and so much is said in just these few words. Very well written. I enjoyed it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


really love those 1st 4 lines. a great write. we all wear masks & keep pain hidden. i like how you get your point across in few words.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I understand exactly what you mean. Sometimes we can't always be the same on the inside as we appear on the outside. Excellent poem. also thx for the hug, I really needed it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Nice write. Beautifully jagged, very cool. This brings up a question though, what keeps us from being whole? Interesting. Its funny how we deny ourselves the right to be ourselves, i blame society. The goal of which is to make everyone the same. Celebrate Your Unique! Without it youd be just another sheep. Anywho, thought provoking poem....

Posted 15 Years Ago


interesting poem. you're right, we're all hiding what we are on the inside. cool!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 9, 2009
Last Updated on October 18, 2009

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Moalix
Moalix

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I am a tall, statuesque beauty. Ha Ha. I love to laugh and smile! I feel everyone should dance in the rain once. If you never forgive you darken your only chance to live! I will try to warm anyones fa.. more..

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