Do you see?

Do you see?

A Poem by Moalix
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Do you?

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When you see me smile what do you see?

When you look in my eyes do you really get me?

Do you think I am strong, unable to break?

Do you really know all I can take?

 

Did you know I cry everynight?

Did you know I cry everynight?

 

Do you see crying as weak?

Wonder why people with pain never speak?

Look in my eyes, what do you see?

Finally see it? Finally get me?

© 2008 Moalix


Author's Note

Moalix
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hm chaos rules your thoughts as emotions run your life.I understand that intuativly

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very well said, with just a few words, I like this. Nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Sad, sad poem but, beautifully put... questions asked and seemingly answered.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very emotive, good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I often find myself screaming inside my head the same lines depicted here. Lot of pain, lot of questions unanswered, i feel this one. Check the spelling though in line four "Do you really now all I can take" is it supposed to be 'know'?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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