Someone loves you more than anyone

It's talk about, there is someone loves you more than anyone. But you should to love it, then the people when love you

When the life is black, and the flowers die. When my pen cries of pain. When you’re broken hearted for person who was in your heart. You closed your eyes from seeing people, and were where you opened your eyes just to see him. Then you trying to go away, you believes that if you would you will forget him. But the truth is, you will not forget who you loved, no matter what he did. Because you really loved him. You make mistakes a lot, because you're just trying to forget him. Yes, you forgot the taste of sleep. Yes, your eyes dried. You hated all the people.

 

 

 Years later, you feel that your body is without a soul. No lover, no friend and no family. Alone and away. But it remains one person with you but one person remains with you. This person loves you more than anyone. His heart is you, he gave you his eyes to see everything beautiful, but you chose to see everything bad and you closed your eyes to see the beautiful part in this life. You know who is this one? They call him “SELF”.

 

 

“If you don’t love yourself, do not wait for them to love you”

Reviews

[Boldapple]

You have a talent to catch attention and then surprise them. I have a feeling this is based on your real life pain, because your emotions are real and I feel your pain. If you ever need a friend to talk to, I am willing to help if it will help.

Keep up the great work!
Cheers

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

Thank you my brother. This is the life, sometimes make you happy and sometimes make you sad. There are no happy person forever. But we should not lose hope and fix our mistakes to be in a right way. Big thanks to you :)

[RANJANKUMAR DESAI]

It is very heartening and inspiring piece, but what it piches me is the language, I suggest to focus on grammer to make the piece from better to best, excellant and unique. All the best my beloved daughter.

[Effector Prime]

this is a brilliant piece of writing my friend.. I was so convinced that it was unrequited love.. what a pleasant surprise :) keep writing! bring us more!!! peace

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

Thank you my friend... Thank you for your encouragement :)

[Effector Prime]

you're welcome :)