A great man!!

A Story by Mo0onlight_UAE

Story and realistic occurred. I stopped to write about it. I think is a very humanitarian pause.

A quiet road, only the sound of cars and trucks. Hot places and there is no place to buy water or something to eat. My eyes could not believe that!. What are my eyes see?. Is this real?. A small child! What are you doing here!. Sorry that not a young, he is a man but he cries like a baby.

" Are you okay?" I said. He cried a lot, little silence. Then he told me " Do you have a cure for the injustice or for the treatment of wound ?. I'm afraid .. I feel lonely .. A large wound". "Calm down, my friend do not cry for the actions of any person. Not every person is worth your tears" I said. He said to me: " What you do if this is the only person who loved her!. Imagine Why she did that?. Because her father told her that I do not have a work. So she live without money, home, food and clothes. Tell me what I do If the God wrote to me to do this incident and Live without legs!!!".

" What is my fault?. What I did in my life to happen to me that!. Is my life ended today!. My family died in an accident. The only girl that my heart choose her, she made me feel like I want to die today before tomorrow. " He said.

I can not say anything of this great man. Do you know that feeling! When you hear the words correctly100%, and a man crying in front of you. And feel that whatever you told him it will not affect!.

Hey girl, is money more important than someone who give you all his life and his heart because he only saw you in his life! Is money more important than man is difficult to be received like him (white heart, a believer, a nice, honest... etc.)!!.

Hey man, believe me! I'm glad you left this girl today. You are a man deserve to live with a girl better than this girl. Do not make this girl stop your life. Your feet is not the cause of that ending your life. Behind every negative thing, a positive thing pushes you to complete your life better. You bodily Full because you have a clean heart. Today, is difficult for anyone full members that have such your clean heart. Lift your head high. Proud of your own. Hey, you're great man.

( The God takes something, to give you the greatest thing)

© 2013 Mo0onlight_UAE

Author's Note

I will be very happy if you see your comments. Thanks to give me some of your time.

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Boldapple

I like your advice to the man in this article. You understand his feelings and told him to be a man! Excellent job! lol

Man now days are more sensitive and complain alot. They don't read the stories in the Quran, when the worst things used to come to a prophet but he is a man, although he is sensitive, but he does his duty. Man shouldn't be afraid of anything, should have a heart of a lion when dealing with difficult situations and love a heart of compassionate when its time to love someone.

I used to be a boy, but life slapped me very hard, now I am becoming a man, Alhamdulillah.

Like Ron said, you have grammar and language issues, but you are a writer. You get your points across and we can understand what you are trying to say. Your points are also interesting, so we are not bored.

Reading should help you and maybe chatting as well. But for chatting, people need to give you time and not everyone might have one.

So try your best and read. Great job once again.