Young age- big mind

Life has changed a lot. Especially our children today are different from children previously. I wish to appeal to my poem.

Is there any child today?, I mean a child's mind. They change a lot. Before, they play outside girls and boys. Before all of them have a white heart. Not one of them thinks wrong. It was all thinking their toys. Who is wrong?. The life or you!..

 

 I just want to see today that a child who does not know any meaning, only know their puppet. Are you find one?. Please, give me hope in this life. Please, say yes I find one. Yaaaah!. How their lives were wonderful!. Loves... White hearts .. Sacrifice .. Affection .. Kindness . What happens in life today?!. Hatred.. Hate.. Black hearts.. Killing.. Lying.. Injustice. Please, enough you all with me destroyed this life. We see people doing wrong and we choose silence.

 

Hey, yes you how do you killed your mother?. You, how you kill your friend, and said " You need money"?. Really I can not understand how these people do that. Really I can not believe my eyes when I read today this young boy who no more than 19-year-old killed his mother by a 40-year-old. How you can did that!. This is your mother. You know what's meaning of this big word " Mother!" . Whatever I told you it would not continue to sense that it deserves. Aaaaah!. Where is your heart when you did it!. I do not want to hear your reason because whatever you do your mother endured a lot for you to become in this age.

 

Is this fact?. There is no longer the heart and mind of a child. Their hearts were very beautiful and their eyes were gleaming. Their thinking was limited wonderful things. Is the real child will back in this life?. A lot of questions in my mind now, But is there someone know the answers ?!

 

 

 (Everything was beautiful .They Changed much )

Author's Note

I will be very happy if I saw your comment. I accept criticism. If you see any mistake, tell me and I will try to modify it in the next time.Thank you for your reading what I wrote.

Reviews

[Boldapple]

First of all, I love this article. You have good questions in your head and you will find the answers around you but asking questions is the best thing you can do.

If a child is not grown up properly, with a good family upbringing, he will eventually become part of society. His society can be either good or bad. But it also depends on how sensitive that person is. If that child doesn't have a good role model in life to follow, then he may not know who to follow. He might have mood swings and maybe when he was in one of these mood swings, he killed his mother. He may have felt bad afterwards but it depends on his sensitive nature to his surroundings.

Keep up the great work Princess!

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

I like what you think and I respect your opinion on my article. Thank you for reading my article. Thank you for your words.

[Ronald J Chapman]

Another beautiful story. i want to read more. Please keep writing.
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Poet Ron

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

Thank you a lot.
Thank you for your encouragement.
You will see more :)

[zainul]

Wonderful thoughts.
Want to read more of your works.
Thanks for sharing.

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

Thanks a lot to wrote that.
You will read more soon Inshallah.
I need your comment to complete my writing.

[zainul]

I am very pleased to read your lovely comment.
Tell me when you post a new writing.
I will read it quickly.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I very much "love" the thought behind this write. And there really are children's minds in this world. Mine is one. I am old and YET...I am young. Because I refuse to let the "outside" in. My world is butterflies and morning glories...the grasshopper ready to spit! My world is the hummingbird and the rabbit in the meadow...the yellow of flowers and the blue of sky. Perhaps the white of clouds has not forgotten me. I enjoyed your write. I am eager to find out where you might be from. English seems like a second language to you. But "love"...love seems to be the language of EVERY poet.

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

So happy to see your comment.
Thank you for your encouragement.

YES, this is my second language and the first language is Arabic. I think I need your help a lot to improve my writing and access to the top of this writing.

[Djourrisse Appleby]

The message of this piece is straight to the point. It has Strong emotions in it, though there are grammatical errors that needs to be corrected. Keep improving and be the best writer there ever is! :)

[Mo0onlight_UAE]

Thanks you a lot.
Thank you for your encouragement.
Can you please tell me what is my errors? I want to improve my writing :)