There Should Be An App For That

Sometimes...
I wish there was an app
That would make you recognize all the things Ive done for you
Not that I'm looking for anything in return or want anything back
But damn that's my kind of app
Or maybe an app that
I could pinpoint your exact mood
And avoid an argument when I'm acting a fool
That'll be the day that everything will be cool
Now that's my kind of app
Or even one that I could bookmark our greatest moments we share
So at any given time I can go back and remember why we're here
The URL would read these-are-the-reasons.com
But it would only show up if you were the one that typed that
S**t I just might have to make this app
It would send me notifications when you're stressed
And it would tell me when to give you space at times of you being depressed
There would be reminders of when to save you at a time of distress
Don't you wish there was an app for that?
At last
It would erase your past
So that I could have a fair chance and wouldn't have to hear
"I've been hurt too many times to bear"
Because I am not himso you close that gap
Just remember who thought of that app

Author's Note

All Criticism Is Good Criticism Be Honest

Reviews

Love this poem! Sarcastic and yet truthful!
It's hard when people don't see all the things we do for them or we can't be what they need! But I think we've got to just live life!
Not worry about the future, just live in the present!
Just give it your best, all you can do!
A great write, I sometimes wish there was an app out there like that!

[arbitrary jane]

seriously. ugh.
but then, you know, it might be a little too easy.

this was great - universal frustration in a suit of nonchalant cool.
have to say though, the sporadic rhyme tripped me up a little.

[Samantha]

an app that
I could pinpoint your exact mood

I totally want that app. Awesome poem.

[Murtuza]

This is a really innovative poem. I like how you've taken the idea of apps and applied it in a simple way. A very touching and honest read :)

[Balls:)]

Man.
i love this.
it's a great poem. it's love intertwined with modernization, it's as if it helps people understand better since your using technology.
You my friend. Wrote a great poem.

Rating: Fantastical

[deeps]

I love the rhyme scheme & flow.
This is wonderful.

[Queen of Hearts]

Flows together nicely and is very sweet :)

[Emily B]

yeah, let me know when you've got it phone-ready . . . sounds awesome

[Searching 4 Serenity]

You should get a patent on one of those ideas, jack