Untouched

Untouched

A Poem by Mjay55

Fingers have never explored
Eyes have never stared without fabric present

Eyes closed tight, she imagines a suddle touch
The moving of her hair

She wants to feel sensual
She hates the void

A soft pair of hands
Up and down her

Her lips tremble
Illusions are not reality

Taste her body
Feel her soul

© 2013 Mjay55


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Intimate..but only in the mind. A sweet longing, very nice poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mjay55

11 Years Ago

Thank you.
The longing and desire of an innocent girl is beautifully portrayed here. Nicely done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mjay55

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much DL.... It's very important to me.
I like this one a lot. Mostly because it is "naughty" without being heavy handed. I also appreciate that you leave some things to the imagination. Great imagery. Thank you for sharing! =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really liked the lingering desire of sensual intimacy coupled with clouded innocence in this piece. Lovely writing! (:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mjay55

11 Years Ago

Thank you so very much... That means a lot to me*

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