I Miss :

I Miss your touch,
I Miss your embrace,
I Miss the look of love in your face;
when our eyes meet, when we're skin to skin.

I can't withhold the love i have within,
your smile you eyes the way we are,
You're my muse, my reason to be,
my heart and soul I give to thee can't wait for your kiss,
And that why it's you I Miss.

Reviews

[Legion]

Nice sentiment and cool idea (as many have had that same feeling and it is indeed a wonderous feeling). Now, make it memorable. Something that the reader can remember later after they have turned the page. It is a love that burns deep within you, let the reader feel that as well. Dig deeply. Read "On Writing Love Poems". It will explain what I mean a little better I hope.

[SimplyDisastrous]

Very sweet, touching poem. Tana. (:

[KaySea]

nice

[Ruth]

To miss someone to this degree is always hard!
A beautiful poem, voiced really well
xx

[Bee]

really sweet and heart-felt. I like the simplicity.

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what a lovely gentle poem..full of sweet sentiment..well written

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. The gentle description and desire was very strong in the words. I like the complete poem. A outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

hm interesting piece, very nice

[Sports Girl]

I liked this

[Jocelin]

I like it :)