Your Kiss

Your kiss makes me weak.

Our eyes meet
your fingers caress my cheek
I feel my legs become weak
You kiss my forehead
Then my cheek
You tease me as I wait for our
lips to meet, then finally i feel
those soft, supple, lips press
against mine. The way it feels sends
shivers up and down my spine. you
hold me against you
I'm too weak to stand
My eyes close as i slip into wonderland
I cant confess how you make me feel
You're my love, my hope
You make me who I am.

Author's Note

Review, review, review! Tell me what you think! (:

Reviews

[al25]

Really great. Seems so real.

[Kelly Taylor]

Holy cow, the imagery is excellent. I could nearly feel what was going on and visualize it so well in my head. I love how the actions show emotion without directly explaining them; lovely metaphors. :)

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there is nothing quite like a kiss! More intimate than most men realise!! love it!

[Ruth]

Beautifully done!
A kiss is the splendour to the heart, wonderful poem love
Greatly crafted!
xx

[Sports Girl]

very beautiful. great job

[Rupid]

What a great job!

[KaySea]

very beautiful

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and loving poem of love. Those opening of emotions are the best days in a life. When sweet dreams become true. Life can be no better. Total poem was outstanding. I like the last lines.
Coyote

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

oh interesting, nice job

[Forever Mine]

love it!