My eyes

The eyes are the window to the soul.

Pouring out my soul
Out with no hesitation to tell
my story with no reservation.
Can you feel it?
Can you hear
My pain?
It's comes naturally
from my heart like a
dagger lodged in my soul.
From this wound spills my
greatest pain. I hope you
realize that you can feel my
story from looking in my eyes.

Author's Note

I'm new here so please tell me what you think! (:

Reviews

[justAnumber]

Every line leading up to the last is so short and powerful. I would like to see that the fluidity remain throughout.

[Andrew Wright]

The emotion here explodes out and pulls me in. Good job.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

hm, interesting, nice job, good poem