Awake or not awake

Awake or not awake

A Poem by Allyson
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Just some thoughts I had in my mind

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Am I awake yet?

Can't you feel
Everything's supposed to be real
When you're awake

But I can't feel
When everything around me isn't real
...But I'm awake

Am I awake yet?

Can't you see me
When you open your eyes
Or am I just a dream
Why can't I realize
I'm awake

Maybe I'm dead
Trapped within my head
So I'm dead
Remembering all the things you said

Am I awake yet?
I'm already dead
Am I alive yet?
But you're in my head
Am I dead yet?

Life is my bed
Upon which my heart I lay
When will this dream
Ever go away?

Life is a dream
As I lay awake
Death is my life
When will I ever wake

Am I dead yet?
Am I alive yet?
Am I awake yet?

Hand amongst my head

Laying me down within life's bed
"Go back to sleep," you said
"You're already dead"

© 2010 Allyson


Author's Note

Allyson
This is my very first poem that has been posted on this website, please leave reviews and for what a noob writer on here can do to make the writing better.

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Life is a dream
As I lay awake
Death is my life
When will I ever wake

AWESOME words here,
This is one amaing write
I like this alot.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Allyson
Allyson

Redford, MI



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I'm Allyson, I have another account but I forgot the password/Email so i'm starting over, I'm a young writer just trying to get her poetry out there :) please leave reviews on the stuff i post! than.. more..

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