Seer of the St. James Hotel
A Book by Mitchell Goth
 Mike Terry, a successful but pessimistic businessman never believed in ghosts, and scoffed at the idea. But when a friend books him in a reportedly haunted hotel room as a joke during a Chicago business trip, thing immediately go awry. As the paranormal  © 2011 Mitchell Goth
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Ignore the grammar problems, as long as their not too serious, I'm looking for constructive criticism on the dialogue, imagery, and flow. The true introduction has not yet been written, so the first chapter you'll read is not actually the first chapter, but it is still fairly easy to start off from.
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I loved this!!! I'm a really picky horror story reader, because, for me, at least, the author has to be able to hold up each character, make the story believable, and stick to how they tell the story the whole way through. You got those all! I got the chills reading it. I can't wait for the ending!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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this reminds me of the horror Room 1084 or somethig, freaking great film too :) I'll take a swing at horror and see whaat its like
Beth :3
Posted 13 Years Ago
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I loved this!!! I'm a really picky horror story reader, because, for me, at least, the author has to be able to hold up each character, make the story believable, and stick to how they tell the story the whole way through. You got those all! I got the chills reading it. I can't wait for the ending!
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Mitchell GothJanesville, WI
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I'm a newer writer. I've been writing as a hobby for years, but more recently I've been looking to publish my novels. I am currently working on a paranormal fiction project as my top priority, with se.. more..
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