She

She

A Poem by Dark Lady Phoenix

She gets up in the morning every day is the same.

She gets on her scooter glad the next day came.

She had a bit to eat and talks to her Mom.

she gets ready for the day that's going to be so long.

She get's on the van with help from her mom.

She takes the ride to the clinic and takes her seat

She takes a deep breath getting ready for this feat.

She gets hooked up to a machine that cleans her blood.

She lays her head back to the sound of the thud.

She comes back home at the end of the day.

She's the bravest person I know what else can I say.

© 2010 Dark Lady Phoenix


Author's Note

Dark Lady Phoenix
This is for a good friend that lives next door to me. She Amazes me in so many ways.

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Yes that is life (or something like that) for many people



Posted 5 Years Ago


Beautiful! Tells you a lot about her personality in such a short time! I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


wonderful write:)

Posted 14 Years Ago


This sure is about a brave and very strong person.

Posted 14 Years Ago


She is very brave and you wrote a wonderful poem about her bravery.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Immortalized.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I'm sure tears would show if it was reviled to her

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful write, saying not alot but just enough..
Nicely done...

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you've created a stunning and cinematic short film for the reader with perfectly chosen words in affecting composition~ a beautiful piece of writing!~

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you have brought this whole scene to life and expressed this amazingly. You should give this poem to her.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dark Lady Phoenix
Dark Lady Phoenix

Conroe, TX



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I'm a 37 year old house wife. I was hurt on the job in 2005 and now disabled. My writing is to me what keeps me going. I have a wonderful sweet husband that I love with everything in me. I hope you en.. more..

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