Paranoid

P- Pain. The pain I have felt all my life of Rejections

        and loss                        

 

A- Adultery. Lived though on both sides of the fence.

 

R- Rage. One more friendship that's a lie. One more person

        who just wants to hurt me.

 

A- Admission. Of things done wrong. Hearts breaking.

 

N- Nights. Crying my self to sleep

 

O- Openness. Talking things through trying to forgive.

 

 I- Inside. Trying to heal and let go of the hurt.

 

D- Decision. To forgive and forget and move on with our    

        lives.

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

Forgive and forget, that's the best thing to do but possibly the hardest at times. Awesome, true to life poem. Like the format you did this in too.

[melissa]

great work:)

[Matthew Kult]

well done.

[Tina Kline]

What awful things to have happened yet you still have the ability to forgive and move on. Love the way you wrote this, creative format.

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

i have to agree with Bubo i really like the way the emotions slid through this piece. Very good.

[Bubo]

Heart breaking but with hope to forgive and move on with life...........I like the way the emotions move through the piece.

[Sports Girl]

This was good. i liked it. nice job.

[Immortal1967]

this is very cool....great job on this baby