You Give. I Take.

In honor of some one special.

I want to give, but my heart feels weak.
I've never had anyone be so kind to me.
I look in your eyes. Do they tell me the truth?
God only knows how I want to believe you.

We both share a lot in common.
In our homes we are poor, but in our hearts we are rich.
Your words feel like heaven.
Oh, what a bliss!

You fill me with love, all up to my brim.
My cup overflows with the love that you give.

Should I trust you? Should I break?
All the walls that I made?
They're breaking in a rush.
A crumpling castle left in the dust.

You say- you won't leave me.
But it's happened before.
People use you, abuse you, leave you down on the floor.

But I love you!
I need you.
And I wish you to stay...

You give, and you give...and I take, and I take.

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

How sweetly you have described your feelings here Misty my dear frnd....Each and every word is flowing with full of emotion....I believe that person is very lucky to get to love a person like you.....Outstanding work mate.....God bless you.....

[Misty.C]

Thank you Dhiman. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Very soothing seems like words are flowing directly from your heart....
That's really a love You give, and you give...and I take, and I take.... :)

[Misty.C]

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you very much for reviewing my work Skyfall.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome my friend :)