Where is your home?
Is it London or France?
Maybe it's America, perhaps Japan.
We all have a civil duty, to protect our home. But most have the misinterpretation that we own our home alone. Your home isn't a country, or a house alone. It's beneath the foundation, the bricks, and the stone.
Stop looking at the pavement. Start looking at the grass. Look at what nurtures life. Now please nurture it back. The planet Earth is your home.
Wonderful despite any amount of time required. It seems to blend and transition perfectly.
Of course I am from the states, but do everything I can to protect our world, which is a must. Things like over hunting, illegal dumping, and waste and littering really do bother me. I'm a borderline vegatarian, trying my best to avoid eating meat. I use reusable grocery bags, recylce, and dispose of batteries properly.
This was awesome and we need more writers like you! Heres to you! :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
That's awesome! I'm from the US too. Anyhow- everything you do seems to be much more than most peopl.. read moreThat's awesome! I'm from the US too. Anyhow- everything you do seems to be much more than most people sadly. Keep up the good work. I appreciate your taking the time to review my poem, so thank you so much! Your words touched me. ^w^ You really know how to make a girl smile haha. Especially your comment on transitions. Transitions have always been very important to me. With bad transitional phrases- the emotion held in the poem can fade. I can tell you write very well just by looking at your writing style in your commentary. So I take your words very seriously. Thanks again- I'll try to look at your work soon in return. :)
8 Years Ago
I mostly write shorter books or nonfiction, as I have a fairly comprehensive blog.
I.. read moreI mostly write shorter books or nonfiction, as I have a fairly comprehensive blog.
I know poetry and how a good poem looks and feels on page, and a really good writer inspires and triggers thoughts in their readers. You did this for me and you are awesome for taking a stand for our world :)
Once again, you have wowed me :) Wonderful piece Misty. Congrats again on a job well done
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thanks Jordan! Hahaha I didn't think my writing was capable of wowing people- but I'm most certainly.. read moreThanks Jordan! Hahaha I didn't think my writing was capable of wowing people- but I'm most certainly happier for it! :)
Wonderful despite any amount of time required. It seems to blend and transition perfectly.
Of course I am from the states, but do everything I can to protect our world, which is a must. Things like over hunting, illegal dumping, and waste and littering really do bother me. I'm a borderline vegatarian, trying my best to avoid eating meat. I use reusable grocery bags, recylce, and dispose of batteries properly.
This was awesome and we need more writers like you! Heres to you! :)
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
That's awesome! I'm from the US too. Anyhow- everything you do seems to be much more than most peopl.. read moreThat's awesome! I'm from the US too. Anyhow- everything you do seems to be much more than most people sadly. Keep up the good work. I appreciate your taking the time to review my poem, so thank you so much! Your words touched me. ^w^ You really know how to make a girl smile haha. Especially your comment on transitions. Transitions have always been very important to me. With bad transitional phrases- the emotion held in the poem can fade. I can tell you write very well just by looking at your writing style in your commentary. So I take your words very seriously. Thanks again- I'll try to look at your work soon in return. :)
8 Years Ago
I mostly write shorter books or nonfiction, as I have a fairly comprehensive blog.
I.. read moreI mostly write shorter books or nonfiction, as I have a fairly comprehensive blog.
I know poetry and how a good poem looks and feels on page, and a really good writer inspires and triggers thoughts in their readers. You did this for me and you are awesome for taking a stand for our world :)
I've loved writing ever since I was a small girl. Although I'm still very young, fifteen, I would like to share my passion with other young aspired writers. I love a good book, One that can make me fa.. more..