Eternal Darkness

This poem is about my view on life after death

Eternal darkness, quietness, your body and mind is sound asleep,

Without dreams, snoring, feelings, motion and not even a peep,

Your heartaches and misery has now came to an end,

No more suffering and pain from living in a world of many sins.

Is there a life after death? The question every one wants to know but still an unsolved mystery

So we search for an answer until the day our lives become a part of history.

No more favorite foods, talking to family or friends we considers close,

No more fishing, hiking or doing the things we love doing the most,

No more laughing, smiling, or enjoying our life,

No more interacting with boyfriends, girlfriends, lovers, husbands or wife.

No more waking up in the morning because your eyes are permanently closed shut,

No more seeing, smelling, or your ability to taste or touch.

You no longer exist anymore; you are just a memory in some ones heart or mind,

Or just another lonely gravesite that your love ones will visit some time.

We all think of death and suicide some of us have committed,

But if they knew then what we know now about death, they wouldn’t have did it.

Death is a due process of life that’s bound to happen in due time,

So enjoy your life while you have one to live; I know I will enjoy mines.

The thought of not being here anymore is a sad feeling,

But the real pain goes out to the ones who died to soon from a brutal killing.

So think twice “People” about your life or some ones else before you decide to pull that trigger,

Because there’s no coming back once your body is buried by the gravedigger.  

Reviews

[Karmee]

But the real pain goes out to the ones who died to soon from a brutal killing.
So think twice “People” about your life or some ones else before you decide to pull that trigger,
Because there’s no coming back once your body is buried by the gravedigger.

Oh My Gosh! This is so true, and so sad.
I wish people wouldn't kill each other. It's sad to see someone die from what
could've been prevented. People shouldn't have to die from some ignorant person
That doesn't know what to do with a gun. It's a sad world we live in.

[MisterDame]

True it sicken me to think about the world we live in today. People have seem to forgotten humanity.