This Lonely Road

Poem about a lonely dark road we've all been down

This lonely road is growing old
The darkness here consumes my soul
This lonely road is getting cold
I'm lost and looking for someone to hold
This lonely road doesn't let go of the lost
It's a place you pay regrets pricey cost
This lonely road has no signs for direction
Here, there is only time for reflection
This lonely road has no company
All that is visible is the darkness in front of me
This lonely road will never bear light
When you're blinded it's never a fair fight
This lonely road is now my home
And here I am, all alone ...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Acron 4]

I think I was bored more then anything else of doing the same old thing over and over, or perhaps coming to the realization that I needed to start again with someone to help me.Now that I'm as old as I am I see it as coming to the end of childhood and finally. finally deciding to move on. where I realized that things might be better and as well easier to approach lives obstacles with two heads instead of just one.......Great read....Thanks for sharing

[MisterAnderson]

You are welcome. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts !

[InsanityWriter]

This is great. :D I loved it!! ^_^ The rhyme and the flow of it were perfect. ;)

100/100

[MisterAnderson]

Thank you so much I appreciate that :)

[Tasha]

I loved this, I loved how you wrote it as well. I'm sorry you are going through this but youdescriped the feeling beautifully. Well done.

[MisterAnderson]

Thank you so much !

[Tasha]

You're very welcome