Today You Made Me Cry

the s&#! love does...

Today you made me cry
At my desk and on my phone
In the bathroom having to blow my nose
In the elevator on my break

Today you made me cry
On the train in front of strangers
On my walk to the house
In the shower and while brushing my teeth

Today you made me cry
I thought about when we met
I thought about the way you left
Now I'm thinking about the way you came back

Today you made me cry
Look at what you've done to me
Like a hurricane revisiting
I'm swept off my feet to fly

I hope I don't fall this time

Reviews

[futurepast.]

Yes, love brings smiles, and unfortunately, tears also. But it is not a bad thing ... I think that everybody should be hurt in love at least once in their life so that they know they true meaning of it.
As for your poem, it shows how this love has affected you and the fact that you cry at all these places and while doing so many things show that you truly loved.
I really hope things are better for you now.
Nice write.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

wow a strong lryical poem very nocely done :)