What it Feels Like to Hold You

Love and appreciation expressed through hugs and comparisons

Like strawberries on cheesecake

Your hugs fill me up

 

Like staring over the Grand Canyon

Your hugs leave me in awe

 

Like blacksand shores and clear waters

Breathtaking are your hugs

 

Like breakfast with green tea

Your hugs are so healthy

 

Like music I sing

Your hugs are fun, warm, and strong

 

Like my parents love

Your hugs nurture

 

Like the hugs I give you

I love your hugs

Reviews

[futurepast.]

This is a very intelligent poem. You have described the hugs of that person in so many ways and at the same time depicted the feelings you have for her. Not only do we learn about the way you feel about the hugs, but we come to know about yourself, for example Grand Canyon leaves you in awe, or strawberries on cheesecake fills you up, and so on.
Nice write.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

simply sweet thats all