Save Me Please

didn't come out right either..grrr

My heart beats for you

yet is breaking without you...

 

Can you save me?

Heal me before all hope is gone?

 

I love you with all my soul

without having seen you before...

 

You feel me when I need you

And love me while im away.

 

Now all thats left is to meet

and see each other face to face....

 

I hope you don't try to hide

So I won't be alone and left to cry.

 

My fears you'll find

only you can fix....

 

Please save me from who i am

Save me from what I am without you.

Author's Note

opinions please?

Reviews

[Steven Cash]

My opinion is that this is amazing. That's my opinion

[Brittany]

I've felt this way before, so personally, I liked it very much. I liked your phrasing and I liked the different type.

[GrownUpTime]

love it. being alone isnt always easy...

[David W Moore III]

I think we all yearn for that person. Very nice write. I love the last line. Brilliant