Bananas, Pears, Pudding, and Cobbler

just a little something that will hopefully make you laugh!

There once was a bigfoot named Yeti

who had a nice fluffy bunny.

She was cute and sweet and so very petite

but didn't know what was good for her to eat.

So one day Yeti went to the library

to look up some healthy foods for Bunny.

They tried bananas, pears, pudding and cobbler

but they all got stuck in bunny's white fur!

Yeti then found a book about vegetables

that said that carrots just might be edible.

Finally deciding that carrots would be best

they went to put them to the test.

Bunny bit the carrot with a big, loud pop

and hopped and jumped while wearing her socks.

As she landed she stubbed her big toe

and let out a cry that hurt her throat.

Yeti watched while cutting his hair

and jumped in shock and growled like a bear.

His hand slipped and he cut off his eyebrow

and he knocked his library book off the table somehow.

And the Moose next door let out a shriek

and spilled hot water all over his feet.

But at last poor Bunny has something to eat

maybe now she won't be so petite.

Author's Note

My sister and I used to do a little writing club with our little brother. We had a warm-up where we all came up with random words that we had to use in a story or poem. This is what I came up with. Hope you had a laugh!!!

Reviews

[Matty Bosox]

This is so fantastically cute and smart in so many ways...It is VERY rare to find a poem filled with humor and sunlight as this one is...So clever with your words yet the same balance of childish innocence...Definitly one of the most original and well thought out, yet simple and childlike writes I have ever reviewed...Which is sooooo difficult a mixture to combine...But your mixture is one of great taste and a delectable sweetness...Great job Missy...Great job indeed...In a writing world filled with heartbreak this and painful that, this was a breath of freash air...:o)

[Missy Lorraine]

Thank you so much!! You just made my day. I was actually thinking about making it into like a children's book with lots of fun pictures. Do you think I should try?

[Morrigan Nicole]

Through shallow intellect, the mind becomes shallow, and one eats the fly, along with the sweets. :P

[Missy Lorraine]

Sissy, you are too cute. Though what you say may seem funny to others, I know the true depth of your words and will not take them for granted. Thank you for the review.

[Beaner166]

Definitely interesting. I liked it. It kinda brings you back to childhood days when writing was just something fun to do. Stuff like this is what builds us up to our passion we have today. Good write.