Burning Skies

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The desire still lingers for the one... yet another has taken its place... yet time will always fulfill you with the one... I guess you could say the saying is true... there's no place for second best... no one remembers them... just the one who was first...

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Thinking of that first special someone? They are always haunting your thoughts! They just wont ever escape!

[OTownPete]

I do believe that wa all have that one major love that never leaves our hearts or completely deserts our minds. You have done well to state that. Your friend in words, Pete

[koty bell]

Wow great write... Very deep yet simple beautifal and wonderful great wotk silence:)

[Rees Thomas]

god you've got a storm in you ahaha

[Speak in Silence]

I think that sometime myself lol

[Rees Thomas]

it's not a bad thing aha ;) gosh im so crude

[Speak in Silence]

Aw, that's okay (: We all are

[Samuel Jack]

The pain of a love never realised burns through your words. Given the subject matter you could have banged on for ages about it, but with a poets discipline you kept toonly what was important.

I hope this is not based on your reality, as its a very sad situation.

keep up the good words.

Samuel

[Panda11598]

I love this! I'm really fond of the last 2 lines in each stanza... Very clever and creative! 100/100

[Dean Kuch®]

I have to tell you Mayhem, I feel so sorry for that 'new' lover. because, unless that old flame that ignites your heart so is no longer a part of this earthly realm, your new man will always feel slightly less than your whole, not quite right.

"Well there's a rose in the fisted glove
And eagle flies with the dove
And if you can't be with the one you love honey
Love the one you're with"

Stephen Stills...

[Speak in Silence]

Sometimes, there are loves you'll never get over. New loves will come along, some will have stronger feelings than the last but you'll always love your first love.

[Simon Welsh]

I love it. Particularly that first stanza.