Wonderlust to Wonder

Daddy?

Daddy can you hear me?

You face is fading away

This was when I was three

Father 

Dear father

Where're you been?

Nine years, no calls

Heartbroken 

Left to die

What am I suppose to do?

Besides wonder why

My legs scarred 

My body starved 

Tell me daddy?

Am I finally good enough for you to come home?

Author's Note

This is just how I feel I guess. It's not that good though. I wrote this the other night at like 2 in the morning, it just came to mind. But isn't that was poetry is about anyways? Putting your thoughts on paper?

Reviews

[Legolas]

A very sad poem for sure. First of all, I am sorry this happened to you. I am proud you're staying strong although at times I know it must be tough. I know nothing about your situation except what this poem has told me. But I want you to know, it's not you keeping him away. You are good enough. Never think that it is your fault.
If you ever need to talk I am here. We could even text if you'd like. I'm here.
Thanks for sharing.

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you for the read. If I need to talk I won't hesitate to message you

[Legolas]

Ok great.

[Hope's Etro]

I agree Miss. May

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. Memories can haunt our sleep. Good to write the words down. Some questions are answered with time. I like the question at the end. Thank you for sharing the poem.
Coyote

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you for reading and reviewing

[Green]

This was one of those things that is beautiful in it's openness and it's simplicity. It's sad and I'd love to say I understand, but I can't really. I'd have to experience it to truly understand and it always drives me crazy when people say that to me so I'll spare you the party line. But I'm rambling, I tend to do that a lot.

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you

[Fréyjä Helv..]

Very expressive. Strong emotions felt. Poems need not to say more words. A few words can often tell more of the story.

[Speak in Silence]

I agree. I'd rather read a short poem filled with tons a emotions than a long one with no meaning.

[Rhianne Ney]

This might be written and just popped randomly on your mind yet it's still a wonderful piece that can use a heart (: I can well symphatize with the narrator of the poem but yeah, reading something full of feelings is better than something that had no shell at all, right?
(:

100/100

~Keep writing~

[Speak in Silence]

Awe, thanks!

[Rhianne Ney]

You're welcome

[Brielle Cartny]

This is very full of heart. The passion is wonderful. I just wish for your pain to be mended. Must be difficult.

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you. It's difficult at times but I just think of all the negative things he's caused and that helps me forgive and forget I guess. Thank you for the read and review.

[Sami Khalil]

"Heartbroken

Left to die

What am I suppose to do?

Besides wonder why>"
A nice write ...:)

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)