Stay

I know you try hard
I know that we both know pain,
I wish you could stay.

Author's Note

This was actually meant for my dad before I thought out who he REALLY was. Now I take this poem in a whole different perspective. Now this is meant for my best friend who lives almost 2,000 miles away. We were going to see each other, but never got a chance. This is for you Brice I love ya, always will :)

Reviews

[Gabriella F. Travaline]

i can relate to this on many levels....very cool

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you :)

[Katie Lynn]

The one form of poetry I can't do (and usually don't like). but this is AMAZING. powerful and it makes sense. you didn't use a strange word to make the right amount of syllables

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you :)

[Legolas]

Very nice haiku. I enjoyed reading this. Hopefully you will see your friend soon.

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you :)

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

sometimes a few words say so much, just like here. Well done......

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you :)

[Erin Thomas]

I really like this! Great haiku. They can be very difficult, and you nailed this one! Good job, keep writing!

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you! :)

[Erin Thomas]

You're welcome!

[That_Guy]

short and sweet, gets the point across. Well done

[Speak in Silence]

Thank you :)

[That_Guy]

You're welcome ;)

[Vampyre of Fantasy]

Wow I liked how you got the message in with so little words. It's very well written.

[Speak in Silence]

Thanks :)

[Vampyre of Fantasy]

You're welcome:)