Too Blind To See (One Direction fanfiction)
A Book by Hannah L.
Love, loss, heartbreak, and hate is all Kayla parks knows... So when a teenage girl suddenly becomes blind and looses everything, who will save her? And will they be to late?
© 2014 Hannah L.
Author's Note
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If you notice anything, spelling, grammar, choppiness, please tell me. I want this story to be perfect. I would like some kind reviews as well if you do not mind :) And if you have any tips on how to write a dialog better, ex. so after every sentence it does not say "I said." "she said" "he said" thank you :) And please tell me what you think of the story line, I feel it has been my best writing idea and I am proud of it and how it is turning out.
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Added on August 11, 2014
Last Updated on August 11, 2014
Tags: blind, girl, one direction, one, direction, fanfiction, fan, fiction, liam payne, liam, london, england, move, hospital, crash, romance, drama, teen
Author
Hannah L.Canada
About
I am a young aspiring writer who will be writing mostly fan fictions. I will greatly appreciate any and all critique and reviews. I am always looking to be a better writer and knowing what you think.. more..
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