Moon Stew

It's more than I asked for

or ever thought would evolve

from subtle, microscopic

'what-if's

to a love affiar

over-fed from a surplus of

eyelash kisses

plumply sitting in the sky

eclipsing the sun.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[STAR CHILD]

this is beautiful

[Crow]

I can envision the subtle imagery.

Refreshing!

[*]

Well done. I like the (S) sounds which give it movement. Every line fits so nicely together. Good imagination as well. 100 from me.

[GTVile]

Quick and to the point. Excellent!

[Sorry Infamous]

This was lovely. well done.

[DavidRyan]

Nice. I love it. I always will. I like how subtle you're getting. As you know, that's right up my alley. Well done.