It's Precious

Dearly Beloved... and all that s**t yeah.

To me.. 

 -Your a brightest star

Lighting up the sky

- Your tough and strong

But it kills you inside.

It's hard when..

-Going to sleep

Not knowing if you ever gonna wake up again

- Seeing other people cry about you

when you feel fine. 

Listen To Me. 

For people + families everything goes wrong in a life time

It's a normal situtation to be in.. 

It's not nice, it kills everyone inside

But day after day.. you pretend to smile.. 

Keep everyone happy.

It doesn't work with me

I can't keep smiling 

Knowing the angels are gonna have you

THEY F*****G  CAN'T HAVE YOU. 

IT'S TO F*****G SOON. 

They can wait. 

At least another few years, Please?

Life isn't fair, It's so unexpected.. 

I swear to god, they can wait. 

Why the good people, She done no harm to no-one

Your all a bunch of wankers, Every single one of you god angel's

None of you exist. NOT ONE OF YOU. 

So they can wait, for the motherfucking moment.

- Miss'Lc

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dina]

Wow that was amazing!

[Chris Taylor]

The venom with which you spit in this one is very potent. I wish you would have added a Author's note with this one. I would have loved to know where your head was at while writing this piece. Anyways, good poem and it cuts deep.

[∂αʌ<..]

i like the last sentenc and the colour which differs..gives a much more profound impact to the poem- on which you did an amazing job! :)

[Amila Jay]

Cool:)

[Frank Purcell]

Great poem!! I like the powerful emotion coming through. If you read the poem i just put up, you can see my view on opposing fate. Well done, and thank you for the read :-)

[Sagar Waingankar]

It's a logical and true state of a person indulged in the material world! Expectations can never be controlled and if you try so, they will give born to new ones! Your way of narrating is good but could have been more beautiful! Try to avoid absurd words! You may need to say bad about somethings, try it the other way! Using such words made me think as if you are ill! Well your choice of theme and to imagine is to be appreciated! Thanks for sharing!

[Shadow in the Dark]

It was a very good poem. Very powerful. I fully understand what message you were trying to get across. One thing that you might want to change is the colour yellow you used it hurt my eyes and i couldn't read the word. Other than that great job!

[Dove]

woah, I'm almost speechless... almost haha. This is a great poem and I enjoyed the read. Its really powerful and the emotion is vented out perfectly.

[Von Alis]

I love this, it's so powerful! Just perfect!

[~Lizzy♬]

Oh my goodness! I love this poem. It left me speechless... :)

~Lizzy~