Apart.

She loved him forever
he never loved her whatsoever,
without him, she never imagined could be
so hard to flee.

"I love him."
she said with so prim.
"She's scary."
He said with a worry.

She never thought they'd part,
being stitched at heart.
Soon she learned,
that he burned
each moment they shared.
She thought he cared.

All those times she caught him lying
she thought she'd keep trying.
She was his deary,
she thought, tho he got weary.

Soon it ended in a heart-break
she wished she had a retake.
She loved him forever,
he never loved her whatsoever...

Reviews

[allie_arrowz]

aww so sad, but very pretty. :)

a sad but lovely poem

[BatFan38]

I loved it!

[jennifer little]

job well done keep up the good work thanks for sharing

[MandaBear]

really pretty:)

[Thea]

Yes, unrequited love hurts a lot...This is one really sad poem...Yet I enjoyed reading...Great work!
:)))

[Emrick]

Nice idea.well written.
good.

[Kelly M.]

Awww, how sad! But it was really pretty:) I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this...

[Victoria Elizabeth]

wow great job! I think the guy I like thinks that about me but im to scared to talk to him

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is sad, but so beautiful!