Shut Up and Kiss Me.

I hear your lovely voice going on and on,
No one is paying attention, I hope you know.
Your just talking all nonsense,
Will you just shut up and kiss me?

I want to feel your lips against mine,
I love you, but I cannot stand you being difficult.
Let the fire ignite between us, I want to make it
awkward around our friends.
Shut up and kiss me already.

Your arms are around me, your laugh is echoing
throughout the woods.
I hear your sweet, lovely voice whisper
"I'm being annoying ain't I?"
"Just a bit", I laugh.


"Just shut up and kiss me baby." You whisper
as you pull me closer.
Your sweet scent is wrapped around my body.
"I love you." I hear you whisper and I smile.

Author's Note

yeeeaaah I'm getting into more Romance writings :D <3

Tisss true<3

Reviews

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is good! I like this piece a lot and hope to read more romance writing by you!

[Victoria Elizabeth]

awesome love poem!!!!!!! Loved it

[Captain]

This is great. Much better than previous work. There is a typo where you say 'sand' vs 'stand' I think, and I find just the line about hating their rents to be unnecessary, but other than that, really great work. I really, really like this one. I think it's one of your more connected peices for sure.
'Captain

[jennifer little]

wonderful good job on this lovely poem keep up the good work

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This is a sweet poem, turned a little sad and reminiscent knowing that it was a lie. But I like it