"The Lord your God is testing you."

"The Lord your God is testing you."

A Poem by Missy Moooooo

I know that you are having a rough time accepting this,
but remember that "The Lord your God is testing you."
He's making sure you really love him. 
Remember he sent his son down 
to die on the cross for our sin. 
For us to be with him forever. 
God you are holy, 
God you've created the world, 
the light, and night. 
Why can't you create peace?
Because you are testing us.
Do we have to be put through such pain?
Satan is doing it to us.
When will the pain end?
When we stop trying to give Satan a foothold. 
"The Lord your God is testing you."

© 2012 Missy Moooooo


Author's Note

Missy Moooooo
I really do not think this is a good poem, but I would love feedback.? (:

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speaks to the spirited nature of testimony, a witness for the cause,
the emotions capture a conviction, a powerful sense of acknowledgement,
the lesson drives home an inspiring point that motivates the believer,
you have a talented way with words, keep up the great work ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice poem! Very concise and simple, yet powerful and true. I like it. :)
~Rae Emeral

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

God gave us freewill so that we can earn our way into his graces and heaven... but like so many things us humans take advantage of it. We fail as a whole on many things like tolerance and selflessness.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought you did a good job because that's basically what's going on. Satan is causing all of this. It isn't Jehovah God who is causing this. You made a good point. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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