Congratulation

It's sorta a song o.o

You kept sweet talking me 
Makin me feel like I was beautiful 
And I know I am not.

The way you made me sound was like
I was royalty,  
Yes 
I knew you were lyin

I was your toy. 
Congratulation. 
On ruinin everythin. 
Congratulation.

Everything that you said made me 
Happy for what
 tomorrow brought,
How can I believe you? 
Well I don't want to

I was your toy. 
Congratulation.
On ruinin everythin. 
Congratulation. 

I can't believe I fell for your lies
I believed those eyes.

I was your toy. 
Congratulation
On ruinin everythin. 
Congratulation

Author's Note

Yeah well it speaks for itself.

Reviews

[Captain]

Everyone falls into the fool prospective from time to time, the trick is just learning from those foolish moments. However, the grammar in this piece I find does make it a little jagged to read. Such as, 'Lyin vs Lying' (ing in general for different words) or Congratulation vs Congratulations. I believe that it would read much more smoothly given those simple little touches.
'Captain

[No name]

Awesome !!!

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is a great piece it shows a lot of emotion.

[jennifer little]

great job on this poem keep up the good work

[Alexis L. Thompson]

Arn't you a little too young to have a broken heart? lol jk jk. Ik how u feel. this is a nice write. Good job!