Daddy<3

The Weight of the world

on your shoulders,

                    Whatever happens next

we'll stick together.

If she leaves, I promise to

help out.

                    In whichever way possible

I just wanna go to

this school,

     I have the chance to change the world,

and I get a free Scholarship.

Daddy,

            we can do this together. We're a team<3

Author's Note

We're really losing everything, my brother, money, and my mom is thretaning to leave this poem is to my Dad telling him that I won't ever leave and that this school would be good for me.
Pursuation and love all in a poem! :D

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

It's sad that you're mother is threatening to leave. It's hard on a family when you are losing things. Just put your faith in God as well as yourselves. You will make it through the tough times. This poem was really nicely written. I could feel the love in this poem. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. :3

[Captain]

Just make sure if you start something, you work hard till the end and keep your goals in sight. Do that, and you can do anything.
'Captain

[Alexis L. Thompson]

My mother left my dad when i was four. ever since then, financials were a struggle at my fathers house. some how we make it through and still get the things we want. and my dad also doesnt want me to go to school far away. are we twins? lol

[R J Askew]

Good luck with your struggle! Dad is lucky. Hold it all together!

[Chrissy]

Awe that's so cute.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this!! :)

[No name]

There is a point of sadness for losing your brother and your mom threatening to leave but I know you have a strong faith and that will get you far. Things will work out for the better and besides that nice write.