A second later

One moment you're a
hard-headed jerk,
the next you're gone.

I heard you told someone
"When I die I want it to be fast."

It was fast

One moment I was
yelling at you
a second later,
you're not here.

I hated you because you picked on me
One moment you put my

brother in the hospital,
He cut his hand for you
one scar that he wont ever forget.

Now your gone.

When you left,
you left a scar in my heart
I won't be the same
I hate myself for hating you
now I miss you.

I won't ever forget you
 or the way you lived your life.

Author's Note

Rest in Peace Montgomery Alexander Dugay Wood. <3
I miss you.

Reviews

[No name]

Really sad but still a good read. You filled this piece with emotion and meaning. Sorry for the lost.

[WhiteWillow]

Very sad, but very heartfelt. Sincere and vulnerable. No matter the material; a wonderful piece, well written.

[R J Askew]

This is raw, raw, raw feeling and strong because of it. I think this line is crackingly, achingly beautiful, 'You left a scar on your way out.' The final line has a harsh note in it, but, despite the superficial hardness of the feelings in your words, it is clear that you write from hurt and loss. You are cross that the dude is gone. Crose with him, life, all of it. Because it hurts.

[Emily Taylor]

Wow Great!

[katyj]

Wow such a powerful read, kind of sad really.